Smiling faces, enjoying the day
Not a sign of woe
Loitering around, seeming free
Nobody's feeling low.
Robust winds start to blow
All begin to fear
Everything is out of hand
Thrashing there and here.
Faces plastered with a frown
Sorrow everywhere
Squalid streets, clouds of gloom
It was just unfair.
The Philippines received some aid
From countries all around
The perseverance never stops
Their super spirit found....
Ishika,
ReplyDeleteYour style of writing reminds of a great American writer O Henry whose creations (especially short stories) were always oozing fascination for nature. I am amazed how each line of your poems elucidates a similar unconditional affection for the nature and an imaginative mind with attributes of an epic poet in making.
Keep the good work going, as your chosen niche will inevitably bring you even more closer to the world around you and it will further enrich your beautiful thoughts.
Well done
Awesum job Ishika..luvd dem all..i really appreciate the way u express ur affection for nature..i wud say its unbelieveble dat its work of a 10 yr girl..luv ur work baby..n all the very best..u wil be a grt poet in cuming future..dats for sure..:)
ReplyDeletethanks!!!!!!!!! I don't know how to express my gratitude:)
ReplyDeletehi ishika...i read your amazing writing's they were just awsm...if this is the 10yr old girl approach...thn you r going to do wonders in future u hve creativity n amazing look towards your surrounding.....all the very best.....
ReplyDeletethank you soooooo much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:)
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